Owen's most recent writing evaluation (all spelling and punctuation copied as best as I could ;-)
Spring
It's spring! It's spring! My sister yelled jumpping on her bed. But I wus still sleping until crash! my sister fell off her bed and in to the fish tank. I ran doun the stars and saw my cat jump out the window. Then I jumped out the window and I fell on the roof. Sumer salting off it toword the padyo. Crunch I landed on the back of a deck chare. The deck chare flue up and ther was a swosh and the deck char fell doun the chimny. I looked around. The yard cenpleetly changed over night. The trees sprouted leevs and flours. The grass was as green as a souer apple. The dandylions wher as gold as lemons. The creeck was cristle cleer. Then my sister thrue the house geco out the window. It scrried doun a holl in the ground the day was so warm I drue a picsher of all the things that made me happy on the first day of spring.
And on a general writing assigment (earlier in the year) he came up with these riddle gems:
Silver cristels on the graoond. Youed lite a fire in a fire plase. It is winter.
My flower fairy:
And her flower fairy creation:
From the November 2002 folder (it was out of order):
1 comment:
Your flower fairy should come and dance on my fairy ring!!!
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